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05-11-2006, 10:23 PM
This is an example of my work :)
05-11-2006, 10:53 PM
You have a lot of talent and a great style. I should probably mention that this thread should probably be posted in the sequential art section. I should also probably mention that I have no idea what's going on here. The art is excellent, so if you want a critique on individual panels, I'd say you're doing a fine job. As for storytelling... it needs some work. The cover, and the last panel of the last page are incredible.
05-11-2006, 11:13 PM
Many Thanks :)
Yo man, these are awesome......I love the linework, its right up my alley, the storytelling is kick ass as well, excellent flow, plusing using the inking like an etching effect, very tight, great figures and faces....overall it kick ass....what is this for might I add?
05-11-2006, 11:53 PM
Awesome! I love everything about it.
05-12-2006, 12:05 AM
Awesome! I love them all! :w00t:
05-12-2006, 12:19 AM
Matt the Greek
05-12-2006, 04:38 AM
Beautiful work, the cover especially is stunning! My only crit is that the action is a little disjointed in places, it's not always a clear flow from one panel to the next. Perhaps `zooming out' for a wide shot would make it a bit easier to visualize exactly what's going on.
05-12-2006, 06:06 AM
Wow, I really like these. Great work in terms of illustration. The details are beautiful.
Storytelling: completely honestly, The storytelling is difficult to follow. It's hard to work out how and where people are related to what.
Lets take the second sequential as as example and just run through it.
What is the subject in the first couple of panels. first we are focusing on the van, is the van important?, panel 2, now guy running between the van and and the trike thing, did he get out the van? is the van no longer important....suddenly the guy flings open a door? where did the door come from? what building are they in? how comes there are more of them, we only saw one earlier?
The jumps in storytelling are huge, its not cohesive and its really hard to follow. If I did this page, I would have had
panel 1 The van outside the building you want the guys to enter,
panel 2: The guys leaping out the van with the front doors in view, maybe a couple in front closer to the main doors as the last couple get out .
Panel 3: all of them burst in the main hallway, maybe the next door you want to enter in view.
Then using panels 3,4 and 5 you already have.
As I said, I really love the level of the detail in the artwork. There is nothing wrong with the actual drawing. But your panel progressions are difficult to understand.
05-12-2006, 08:31 AM
Let me guess...you are from Portugal or Italy? Anyways Great stuff. I don't see any of the problems listed above I thought it read smoothly. I could totally imagine you illustrating some Dylan Dog.
05-12-2006, 08:34 AM
Thanks to all!
I'm from Italy and i love Dylan Dog....
05-12-2006, 08:36 AM
Ha! I knew it! :laugh:
05-12-2006, 11:14 AM
ain't got no crits...
looks great i especially like the cover....you're really talanted :har:
05-16-2006, 10:24 AM
Thanks to all!
05-16-2006, 11:12 AM
THe computers at my school are so sloooooooow normally i wouldn't wait the five minutes for stuff to load but man your stuff is worth it
05-16-2006, 01:00 PM
Wow. Great stuff. LOVE the style!
Give us more!
05-16-2006, 01:30 PM
Great graphics throughout. As a writer, I'm always enticed by such work, seeing
possible stories galore that would fit so wonderfully with your clean style.
Thanks for posting,
Some of the pages are reminiscent of Moebius. Excellent work.
05-17-2006, 04:20 AM
Very nice, they have a definite Euro feel to them.
05-17-2006, 05:35 AM
Very very cool stuff. I'd love to read what this character is all about. :thumbs:
05-17-2006, 09:25 AM
thanks for viwing and comments....
05-17-2006, 11:37 AM
too many red x's!!! i like what the few pages that i see, though. :banana:
Your art is really good but none of your characters show any expression whatsoever. My only crit so get some screams or smiles or something going on.
05-18-2006, 12:30 PM
I love your style. Lots of wonderful textures and good porportions.
05-18-2006, 12:32 PM
thanks for viewing,
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