2 Sequential exercises

[korintic]

Here's two recent exercise pages I've done.
There's no bigger story behind either -just practising.
C&c appreciated.

Devouring of the berry-

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a113/korintic/Boison1.jpg



The Bomb-

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a113/korintic/Thebomb.jpg

Thanks for looking!

[cinam]

The artwork and storytelling are done very well. I especially like your digital coloring. my suggestion would be to put equal time with the dialogue ballons. If you do that, the two pages will look professional.

[korintic]

Thanks. Yeah I've just started practising lettering so I definitely will keep at it and try to get it tight.

[Wheeljack]

First page is profane, obscene, dandy-ish and makes me... curiously aroused. Why not use Blambot fonts?

[Sequential76]

You're laying down some good ground. I love the pages and I hope to see more.