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korintic
05-02-2006, 06:47 AM
Here's two recent exercise pages I've done.
There's no bigger story behind either -just practising.
C&c appreciated.

Devouring of the berry-

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a113/korintic/Boison1.jpg



The Bomb-

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a113/korintic/Thebomb.jpg

Thanks for looking!

cinam
05-02-2006, 04:41 PM
The artwork and storytelling are done very well. I especially like your digital coloring. my suggestion would be to put equal time with the dialogue ballons. If you do that, the two pages will look professional.

korintic
05-04-2006, 08:36 AM
Thanks. Yeah I've just started practising lettering so I definitely will keep at it and try to get it tight.

Wheeljack
05-05-2006, 12:32 AM
First page is profane, obscene, dandy-ish and makes me... curiously aroused. Why not use Blambot fonts?

Sequential76
05-05-2006, 10:13 PM
You're laying down some good ground. I love the pages and I hope to see more.