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BigDC
10-18-2017, 06:54 AM
Batman
https://img00.deviantart.net/a47d/i/2017/284/1/d/batman_by_davidcunningham-dbqaysj.png
Flats & Colors - Me
Inks : Jeff Graham
Pencils : David Finch

Tell me what you think?

sevans
10-18-2017, 06:58 PM
No major issues with the colours EXCEPT that the outside border BLUE does not work.
It is too close to the panel artwork colours, and quite distracting.
These are dark pages, maybe black or a darker blue would be less distracting.

jeffchris50
10-18-2017, 10:55 PM
Gotta agree with sevans; it's a little too much blue overdose. Colors in the panels would pop more if the gutters were either white or maybe a contrasting color to all the blues used throughout the page. Using the same digital background in panels 1, 3 and 5 is a bit repetitious and redundant. Might've been interesting to use warm colors in those three panels, maybe yellowish, orangish and reddish in order to sort of mirror Batman's evidently escalating temper.