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Egef
09-25-2017, 10:05 PM
Hope you like it! :bounce:

https://img00.deviantart.net/55db/i/2017/268/7/8/dc_sample_by_edwinestrada-dboke9n.jpg

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jeffchris50
09-25-2017, 11:43 PM
Black box. White X. No colors. Much sadness...

Evidently your links were not working properly when I looked at this last night, so all I was seeing was the infamous little black boxes with white Xs in them. NOW I see colors! Much better! LOL!

Egef
09-26-2017, 01:33 AM
Black box. White X. No colors. Much sadness...

??? I don't get it

Egef
09-26-2017, 11:49 AM
Black box. White X. No colors. Much sadness...

Evidently your links were not working properly when I looked at this last night, so all I was seeing was the infamous little black boxes with white Xs in them. NOW I see colors! Much better! LOL!

Oohh haha 😂 ok thank you!

SeanE
09-27-2017, 07:09 AM
You've got too many broad flat gradients. They're not defining the actual shape of the object. So work on getting these to have more depth and actually defining the shape of what you're colouring.

sevans
09-27-2017, 03:28 PM
I like your colour palette, suits the imagery well.

However, I'm personally not sure if having so many smooth/pretty gradients suits the artwork. I feel a few sharp edges and some 'grit' might add alot to this page.

Egef
09-30-2017, 01:45 PM
I don't think is not too necessary putting to many cuts in an object to give it shape, flat colors is good too, and broad flat gradients too, clearly example of that is here:

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-T0k8P_9j2I8/TwtH5LHp5dI/AAAAAAAAACI/5xf_q0RJz24/s1600/blueberry1.jpg

Whatever, IŽll try to put more volume on the objets anyway! Thank you!