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JJ422
09-15-2017, 12:41 PM
The cover for my new comic!

After God's murdered body appears on the beaches of Boston, the world is thrown into apocalyptic chaos, and the devil himself hires a psychic detective to find the killer! Available here:http://bit.ly/2xbd1zb

https://img00.deviantart.net/fee8/i/2017/258/c/6/the_devil_and_the_detective__1_cover__color__by_jj 422-dbnavse.jpg

JJ422
09-19-2017, 10:28 AM
The fourteenth page from The Devil and The Detective, more pages here: https://jj422.deviantart.com/gallery/63666517/The-Devil-and-The-Detective

https://img00.deviantart.net/fcc1/i/2017/262/1/7/the_devil_and_the_detective_page_14_by_jj422-dbnm7b5.png

JJ422
09-29-2017, 02:50 PM
Page one from The Devil and The Detective, letters by Lucas Gattoni, more pages here:https://jj422.deviantart.com/gallery/63666517/The-Devil-and-The-Detective

https://img00.deviantart.net/8710/i/2017/271/6/7/the_devil_and_the_detective_page_1_by_jj422-dbh0nnp.png

Neil Allen
09-30-2017, 03:18 PM
This is an interesting looking comic. The thing about black and white comics, especially ones without any gray toning or very little, is that it can be hard at times to tell what is going on. So, as an artist, it's good to take extra care that what is being put down on paper is easy to follow.

That fly character on the top panel on the third page can stand out a lot more. To me eye, he's kind of getting lost in the busy background. If that word balloon wasn't coming from him, I don't think I'd know what he was supposed to be. I think detail and line weight are the areas to work on to make things in situations like that easier to understand. Perhaps give the fly a bolder outline and make it more detailed, and maybe make the background less detailed.

Also, it may be a good idea to practice drawing/inking water. I can tell what it's supposed to be in the comic, but it doesn't look all that representative here, even for a cartoony style. It's something I had to look up and I'm not saying I'm an ultimate master at it. It can be tricky, especially since it can be so varied.

JJ422
10-09-2017, 03:12 PM
Thanks for your critique, Neil Allen. Yeah, water is difficult to do in just pen and ink.

JJ422
10-28-2017, 04:44 PM
Page 3 from The Devil and The Detective
https://img00.deviantart.net/3ec0/i/2017/280/c/5/the_devil_and_the_detective___page_3_by_jj422-dbpoz5u.jpg

JJ422
11-18-2017, 04:26 PM
Page 13 of The Devil and The Detective
https://img00.deviantart.net/80d8/i/2017/234/c/a/the_devil_and_the_detective_page_13_by_jj422-dbkxt9q.png

12013
11-25-2017, 07:11 PM
so...im gonna add some thoughts and I hope it comes across right.

your pitch for the book..."gods dead body...devil hires psychic". that actually sounds fucking awesome. so few pitches actually sound good and that made me go.."hmm..theres a lot of cool shit that could happen here",

of course execution is key. I guess there would have to be a large amount of suspension of disbelief if a guy walking around literally looks like satan. its a neat visual for sure. but the book would have to take a certain tone of almost dark humor maybe to work?
anyway...also...the story has so much potential. I see this as something that Alan Moore would make amazing. so theres the pressure to make it pay off. but we all have that when putting out work out there.

now...my problem.. the art to me just looks.. so not up to the level of the concept. I really don't mean to sound douche...but its really rough.
maybe in the context of the story it works exactly right..i know some books do work with this rough indie style look.
I just want to see Adam Hughes drawing this...or Mike Mignola, or Mark Silvestri. it sounds so awesome..i want it to look awesome.
id want to draw this book.

anyway...I hope you find success with it. sounds neat to me.

rob

JJ422
11-27-2017, 12:06 PM
Thanks so much for your response, Rob. The book does take a dark comic tone for the most part, and Satan can disguise himself as human when he needs to.

Thanks again!

JJ422
12-10-2017, 09:11 PM
Early character designs for The Devil and The Detective
https://img00.deviantart.net/b498/i/2017/322/d/1/early_character_designs_by_jj422-dbo1fth.png

sevans
12-10-2017, 10:58 PM
The idea/premise is very cool.

Satan needs a Judas Priest T-Shirt.

JJ422
12-19-2017, 06:06 PM
Cover process from sketch to color for The Devil and The Detective #1
https://img00.deviantart.net/50c9/i/2017/277/9/e/the_devil_and_the_detective__1_cover_process_by_jj 422-dbotftf.png

12013
12-26-2017, 11:22 PM
hey bro, I left a message on deviant as well. but do you have a different way to order this book rather than the link you left on deviantart thru comixology? I tried to do that process..even literally had my debit card out to buy, and it was so many steps and pains in the ass to sign up, but go here, but also go here..sign in with your amazon account(of which I don't have one), that I just gave up. this isn't YOUR fault..but I'm just looking for a way to get a copy of the thing.

rob