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jetzun
09-05-2017, 04:36 PM
https://orig00.deviantart.net/a5a2/f/2017/248/d/e/spiderman2099_samp_1_by_jetzun-dbmhx0p.jpg
https://orig13.deviantart.net/1b06/f/2017/248/9/0/spiderman2099_samp_2_by_jetzun-dbmhwye.jpg
https://orig11.deviantart.net/4f32/f/2017/248/b/c/spiderman2099_samp_3_by_jetzun-dbmhwvt.jpg
https://orig12.deviantart.net/1357/f/2017/248/d/2/spiderman2099_samp_4_by_jetzun-dbmhwt2.jpg

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kevinharte36
09-05-2017, 05:18 PM
Wow, very good! Very dynamic.

MattTriano
09-05-2017, 07:18 PM
These are great! Minor issues of framing (3.4 spider-sense squished, 4.6 cropped left foot) but leaving room for dialogue is a good habit and you seem to be doing that. Spot's face also feels weird, like the rendering belies the form of a face and is another complex shape entirely -- is that intended?

Great environments, dynamic figures, clear action. Professional pages! Keep doing them and posting them and you'll get noticed, submit to editors when possible. Do a webcomic, a page/week of whatever story you want -- endless samples would work ie wordless action -- or something that requires lettering and perhaps colors if you want.

Definitely keep going!

jetzun
09-05-2017, 11:57 PM
These are great! Minor issues of framing (3.4 spider-sense squished, 4.6 cropped left foot) but leaving room for dialogue is a good habit and you seem to be doing that. Spot's face also feels weird, like the rendering belies the form of a face and is another complex shape entirely -- is that intended?

Great environments, dynamic figures, clear action. Professional pages! Keep doing them and posting them and you'll get noticed, submit to editors when possible. Do a webcomic, a page/week of whatever story you want -- endless samples would work ie wordless action -- or something that requires lettering and perhaps colors if you want.

Definitely keep going!

Thank you for the advice!

Will Do!!

Scribbly
09-06-2017, 12:13 AM
Wow. I can really believe Spider-Man is on these pages jumping panel to panel.
Great dynamic! :kewl::kewl:

jeffchris50
09-06-2017, 12:17 AM
Wow, Jethro, I was just checking out some of your other stuff over on your DA page. Gotta say, some of it really blows me away, my friend! I'm cobbling together a review of these sample pages and will post it as soon as I'm not stuck here in Corporate Hell. LOL!

SSTiger
09-08-2017, 08:20 PM
Panel 2.1 looks really cool.

It's always damn impressive to see that single-character-multiple-avatars-multiple-actions thing. I can totally buy the smug look on Spot's face.

("The Spot. Dumb name, Disturbing power." - Daredevil)

I agree about the framing thing - that "squished" spider sense is just weird. It also doesn't seem to be absolutely necessary since he's being rescued in the next panel and spidey-sense doesn't really come into play in the action; so you can just get rid of it and the narrative still plays out fine, IMHO.

Overall nice work!

12013
09-08-2017, 09:44 PM
what else can be said. great work.

ScottM1911
11-20-2017, 09:52 PM
Wow, this stuff IS good, very pro