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cesare2009
08-05-2017, 02:13 AM
After hearing some feedback on other pieces, I finished the Supergirl I posted in another thread. I may keep going....

http://www.cesaretatarelli.com/samples/supergirl2.jpg

jeffchris50
08-05-2017, 03:11 AM
When I saw the title of the thread, I knew I was gonna like what I saw before I even clicked on it, Cesare! The first incarnation was good; this one is even better! I'm glad to see Kara doesn't have the big tumor on her leg anymore! ;)

I think you buxomed her up a bit, which is good; my only complaint with the current TV Supergirl is she IS a bit lacking in a couple of assets, but that's only cosmetic stuff.

Shadows and light are great; looks like there's only one light source, which is good and I have always liked the slightly upturned face; not an easy angle to pull off successfully, but you do a fine job. Love the variations in line weight, as well, in both her hair and costume, but also in the sort of outline effect you have going around the whole figure; makes it pop nicely.

Nit picky time 'cause I can't be a Capricorn and NOT be nit picky. Her right hand/wrist area still seems a little to thin, like there's not indication of where her wrist ends and her hand begins. Also, watch the curve on the right shoulder; it's pretty bulbous compared to her left. Shoulders are generally pretty narrow, even on female sooper heroes. If you could move some of the bulk from her shoulders to her hips and widen them up just a touch, she would look even better as women's hips are oft times one of their greatest assets as is the gluteus maximus the hips make swing around oh-so nicely! Only other observation is, with the angle her left foot and leg are at, seems like to might see a little more of the heel on her boot.

Besides all that, this art makes me happy!!

cesare2009
08-05-2017, 03:50 AM
that shoulder, yeah......the foot, yes, maybe....

Justice41
08-05-2017, 12:11 PM
The Capes and how the hair cuts the cape off is wonky. The flapping cape doesn't look as if it's attached. the lines don't flow from shoulders to full cape. Plus if the winds strong enough to move the cape that much her hair would also be flowing .

cesare2009
08-05-2017, 03:08 PM
Good crits

lesson learned, be honest with your work and open minded

This one is done regardless

http://www.cesaretatarelli.com/samples/supergirl3.jpg

kong
08-05-2017, 04:05 PM
nice rendering.

SageGod
08-05-2017, 07:20 PM
Heres a good reference to fix that pose issue.

http://www.nhs.uk/Livewell/Backpain/PublishingImages/posture/one-leg-b_DSC2467.jpg

salvador raga
08-05-2017, 11:30 PM
I like it!

cesare2009
08-06-2017, 02:16 AM
Heres a good reference to fix that pose issue.

http://www.nhs.uk/Livewell/Backpain/PublishingImages/posture/one-leg-b_DSC2467.jpg

That is one boring pose, terrible choice. What pose issue are you referring to?

SageGod
08-06-2017, 03:09 AM
https://img11.deviantart.net/0d54/i/2017/217/4/3/fix_pose_by_fxmesher-dbj17ka.jpg

cesare2009
08-06-2017, 07:50 PM
the comparison doesnt apply to the extreme curve of my pose.......the real problem is her right leg should appear a little farther back, and I don't think I achieved that illusion...

good lesson though

SageGod
08-06-2017, 11:49 PM
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/23/15/e2/2315e2efcfe6a30e50f4086ba755edc5--fashion-illustration-template-fashion-illustrations.jpg


The extreme curve doesn't dictate the perspective of the leg the direction the hip is pointing does. No matter how extreme. The weight of the body has to be distributed correctly of the body can't stand in its stance. The left hip would have to come forward to push the other leg back in perspective.

https://thumb9.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/2356805/395294962/stock-photo-girl-dancer-leaned-to-the-right-side-holding-her-left-hand-on-hip-395294962.jpg

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cesare2009
08-07-2017, 12:27 AM
you're forcing the issue, the pose of the character isn't a problem, why are you trying so hard to make your point....??
your diagram doesnt make sense either....the one with the overlays....

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/12/ae/9b/12ae9b17239b15ad662319afa19c4103--fitness-babes-health-fitness.jpg

JAM
08-16-2017, 04:21 PM
I think it's looks good, good stance a bit dynamic... it works, good drawing!

JAM,............................