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DavidNH
07-22-2017, 02:59 PM
Here are some short story project that I did recently. Hope you dig. All crits are welcome XD.

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Neil Allen
07-22-2017, 04:46 PM
I'm a bit confused at the perspective for the first picture. Is it a somewhat top down image, with the character flying toward the camera? Her feet look really long in the image. Good perspectives on the second page.