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drake_jess@yahoo.c
07-12-2017, 08:16 PM
Digital Inking practice I completed using another artists pencils/inks

Original pencils by John Byrne for Blood of the Demon.

I would appreciate any constructive criticism you are willing to offer. I am also interested in collaborating on comic work with other pencilers/inkers.

http://img01.deviantart.net/5a91/i/2017/185/8/9/botd0101small_by_malcolmjdrake73-dbf4ahz.jpg

DJA
07-12-2017, 09:08 PM
Firstly , I am by no means an inker but visually to me- It seems like there should be more line variations. It looks a little muddy. Maybe a little more line weight variation?

12013
07-14-2017, 03:50 PM
its hard to see when its so small. if you could post bigger scans it helps a lot.

but I would agree that line weight variation could be a focus.

things like hair and the beard are looking like a bunch or wavy lines more than real hair that flows and moves ..etc..

rob

Charles
07-27-2017, 02:53 PM
Post larger images. It allows for easier and better browsing of the details.