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donnyhadiwidjaja
04-30-2017, 12:25 PM
Dear Friends,
These are pages for DC entry 2017 that I was followed..
Please feel free to drop me the critics or directions..
These will help me gain better art skill in the future

Thanks :)

http://img05.deviantart.net/4fd0/i/2017/120/5/8/practice_batman_catwoman__p01_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mocc.jpg

http://pre06.deviantart.net/84d9/th/pre/i/2017/120/a/0/02_03_spread__small_bw_adj_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mqh1.jpg

http://img07.deviantart.net/b86f/i/2017/120/a/4/04_05_spread__small_bw_adj_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mqmr.jpg

http://pre06.deviantart.net/88f9/th/pre/i/2017/120/9/b/06_small_bw_adj_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mqsf.jpg

MattTriano
04-30-2017, 07:44 PM
FYI images show as broken links

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-01-2017, 08:29 AM
mm.. I add URL links from my deviant art.. but the photo(s) failed to appear :( I re try but failed.. Anybody can help me please ? Thanks

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-01-2017, 11:12 PM
let me retry to re upload the picts ... :)

http://donnyhadiwidjaja.deviantart.com/art/practice-batman-catwoman-p01-677943228

http://donnyhadiwidjaja.deviantart.com/art/02-03-Spread-Small-Bw-Adj-677945989

http://donnyhadiwidjaja.deviantart.com/art/04-05-Spread-Small-Bw-Adj-677946195

http://donnyhadiwidjaja.deviantart.com/art/06-Small-Bw-Adj-677946399

MattTriano
05-02-2017, 02:46 AM
Nah

therafalee
05-02-2017, 03:19 PM
From Deviant Art you can't just copy the URL, you must right click the image - click view image - now you copy that URL and it will work.

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-02-2017, 04:09 PM
Thank You Rafa Lee..It is work!
Now the photo are shown..: )

Bishop
05-02-2017, 04:17 PM
Hit "quote" on this post and look at how the url is formatted. This is what it needs to look like (http://pre06.deviantart.net/88f9/th/pre/i/2017/120/9/b/06_small_bw_adj_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mqsf.jpg):

http://pre06.deviantart.net/88f9/th/pre/i/2017/120/9/b/06_small_bw_adj_by_donnyhadiwidjaja-db7mqsf.jpg

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-02-2017, 04:26 PM
Yes Bishop.. :)

Bishop
05-02-2017, 04:45 PM
:laugh:Oops. They still weren't showing when I posted my comment. Pages look good!

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-02-2017, 04:52 PM
Thanks Bishop :)

therafalee
05-02-2017, 07:10 PM
Wow, I'm glad to see it worked, and also happy to see your art, this pages look amazing!

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-03-2017, 06:35 AM
Thank You Rafa Lee .. :D

Scribbly
05-04-2017, 04:52 AM
Great page samples.
As nitpick for your improvement, the hands.
Page 2 (spread page) panel 4: Batman's right hand looks confusing. That thumb is odd.
Page 2 ( spread page) Panel 6: Batman's right arm looks odd, actually his elbow. Also, it seems he's grabbing her by the hair. Her face could be seen more towards the reader. Maybe in profile? Since this is an important panel in page. Her left hand could be more out. As in a gesture to stop him or erased. As it is, is odd to see it as coming from her mouth.
Page 4 panel 3: Batman's right hand looks very small. Her left hand looks small too. The hands of them both struggling in the back in same panel could be erased. As it is, it looks confusing. Batman's crotch is shown wide close to hers hips. It could be slightly away. As an small space of separation in-between them. Like they are "not that close", yet.

Great page samples.

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-04-2017, 08:12 AM
Thanks Scribbly..Yes, I have trouble with the hands anatomy... I will learn the detail more.. Thanks to point me the weakness...It is so help me to improve the skill :D

Orlan29
05-04-2017, 05:01 PM
I like the pages nice work! maybe a few things to work like anatomy and such but very nice looking pages :)

Orlando

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-04-2017, 11:08 PM
Thanks Orlando.. Yess..I must fixing my anatomy drawing points...

Lord Fejj
05-06-2017, 06:30 AM
Beautiful pages! I don't have Scribbly's good eye, so all I can say is awesome!

donnyhadiwidjaja
05-06-2017, 10:08 AM
Thanks Lord Fejj... still many points need to upgrade to be honest ..:)