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emmanuelxerxjavier
04-05-2017, 01:39 AM
Hi Guys!
here is my wonderwoman sample pages i used for DC Talent search.
i hope you guys like :). crits and comments are welcome :)

http://img10.deviantart.net/fdad/i/2017/057/3/7/wonderwoman_page_1_inks_colors_by_emmanuelxerxjavi er-db0jfog.jpg
http://img04.deviantart.net/f503/i/2017/057/b/4/wonderwoman_page_2_inks_colors_by_emmanuelxerxjavi er-db0jflt.jpg
http://img06.deviantart.net/5617/i/2017/057/6/a/wonderwoman_page_3_inks_colors_by_emmanuelxerxjavi er-db0jfiy.jpg
http://img00.deviantart.net/291f/i/2017/057/a/0/wonderwoman_page_4_inks_colors_by_emmanuelxerxjavi er-db0jfg7.jpg

also some pages for my GN together with the awesome writer/producer and colorist: Jordan Hart
Issue 1 available at comixology Alterna Comics
title: Doppleganger
http://img06.deviantart.net/c6eb/i/2017/057/0/0/doppleganger_issue_3_samples_spread_by_emmanuelxer xjavier-db0jg43.jpg

http://img01.deviantart.net/fa46/i/2017/057/6/4/doppleganger_issue_2_samples_spread_by_emmanuelxer xjavier-db0jg12.jpg

more examples here at my deviantart:
http://emmanuelxerxjavier.deviantart.com/gallery

therafalee
04-05-2017, 11:46 AM
Hey man this is very nice, specially the line art, I like how able to give then movement, now on to some critiques:

The only problem I saw was in SG upskirt and WW butt shot when throwing SG through the roof. These days publishers are trying to bring more girls into reading comics so this kind of things are not industry tendencies, (unless it's Harley Quinn) so I would avoid doing it on sample that goes straight to DC.

About the colors I think you need to focus a lot more about the environment, things like WW values are the same when she is on the streets at daylight, as when she is inside the dark place.

emmanuelxerxjavier
04-09-2017, 01:22 AM
Hey man this is very nice, specially the line art, I like how able to give then movement, now on to some critiques:

The only problem I saw was in SG upskirt and WW butt shot when throwing SG through the roof. These days publishers are trying to bring more girls into reading comics so this kind of things are not industry tendencies, (unless it's Harley Quinn) so I would avoid doing it on sample that goes straight to DC.

About the colors I think you need to focus a lot more about the environment, things like WW values are the same when she is on the streets at daylight, as when she is inside the dark place.

thanks for the crit therafalee...
i showed this sample set to an editor at the big 2 and they said the very same exact thing...

12013
04-15-2017, 04:51 PM
these look really really amazing. I dig it

rob

gizroc2
04-18-2017, 01:12 PM
I like your work on the GN more than the WW pages. The very first panels is weird. WW's lower legs are too short, and the little girl's head is way too small. She looks like an adult who has been shrunk down. But overall the work is very well done!

donnyhadiwidjaja
04-30-2017, 12:17 PM
Love the pages Xerx..You going better and better ...for these; maybe the Wonderwoman's face need more work to gain more beauty look

emmanuelxerxjavier
05-01-2017, 05:08 AM
thanks Donny!... i have been practicing drawing women :)... but i need more practice i guess. :).

Orlan29
05-04-2017, 05:07 PM
Nice work! on WW pages she looks and maybe her nose look is the problem of the beauty but I admire your pages on people and kids

Orlando

emmanuelxerxjavier
05-10-2017, 01:54 AM
http://img07.deviantart.net/f51a/i/2017/108/7/7/wendigo_x_men_samples_page_1_by_emmanuelxerxjavier-db6cf7g.jpg

http://img00.deviantart.net/fdfb/i/2017/108/d/f/wendigo_x_men_samples_page_2_by_emmanuelxerxjavier-db6cf9u.jpg

http://img04.deviantart.net/fd95/i/2017/108/c/6/wendigo_x_men_samples_page_3_by_emmanuelxerxjavier-db6cfbw.jpg

http://img13.deviantart.net/ad37/i/2017/108/b/8/wendigo_x_men_samples_page_4_by_emmanuelxerxjavier-db6cfcm.jpg

pandayboss
05-10-2017, 06:54 AM
These are amazing pages Emannuel! Loved it!:bounce::bounce:

I always see your pencils before, are these your inks & colors? They're awesome!! Great work, man.:carrot::bounce:

emmanuelxerxjavier
05-10-2017, 08:20 AM
thank you pandayboss :). yes i have been inking and coloring my work recently... so i practiced with some marvel and dc characters. i'm glad you liked them.

TheRealityComics
05-10-2017, 07:37 PM
Really nice work.

I'd also recommend concentrating more on where you want to take the reader's eye from panel to panel. For instance, panel 2 is such a change in camera angle, WW gets a little lost in the BG. Then, from panel 3 to 4, based on where she's looking (in P:3), yes, she should jump in the direction she jumps in P:4, but that forces the eye to essentially look at the panel backwards (i.e., rather then seeing the spot from which she jumps first and the eye following her up, we're seeing her in the air & following down to the stationary activity).

The next page's first panel makes it seem like a page is missing -- not sure what grabbed her and knocked her to the street. And I agree with the butt shot stuff. Not that there's anything wrong with it per se, but it does seem gratuitous both times (and the WW shot has a bit of anatomical incorrectness issue).

But I do like your takes on WW, SG, and the X-Men in the next sample (I think Supes is a bit skinny; also, that costume design never worked for me [not your fault]; b/c it doesn't coalesce -- here's a tweet about it I posted: https://twitter.com/TheRealityComix/status/853449820828205056)

-Keith

MattTriano
05-10-2017, 09:19 PM
Nice work overall!

Dig the quality of your lineart and color theory; panel to panel transitions need work and I have a hard time figuring out where we are a lot (which is problematic b/c we/re in a forest clearing the whole time right?). Be sure to keep characters justified in relation to one another (people on the left stay on the left, people on the rt stay on the right). Re-establish place and people often. Colors need minor cleanup, some painterly out-of-lines stuff works but some looks wonky. Add bright white centers to Storm's bolt on 1 and other energy fx across pgs, pay attention to tonality (sometimes the reflected light on your characters appears brighter than the energy source itself).

Post more! Keep going.

emmanuelxerxjavier
05-11-2017, 12:22 AM
thanks! Matt Triano
yup, will keep in mind character placements... sample script was very difficult :)... im glad you liked the color scheme, yeah, i need to clean up more and practice more on coloring and effects...
thank you for your good eye :).

YellowDogArtistry
05-15-2017, 06:10 AM
jesus that's good! it's tasty even.