View Full Version : Starfallen - Project development

02-19-2017, 09:05 PM
Hello folks!

Been awhile and thought I'd house a thread on my project. I currently attend SCAD Atlanta and am studying Sequential Art for a MFA. Had a class on narrative structure and we had to start a story for said class. Well, this happened and that happened and now I have a project I'm very excited for and hope to have a handful of pages by summer. However, since it's still in working stage I'd kinda like to get feedback early on.

So, thank you for taking a peek!

Not sure if I'll be pitching it anywhere, but at the very least I'll make it a webcomic. We'll see..

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To do:

- story structure
- Plot premise
- main character rough designs and finals
- environment sketches / ideas
- Page design and look

- Script Outline [Current status = 24 pages outlined]
- Chapter 1 thumbnails [current status = 7 pages ]
- Roughs
- Finals
- Cover

Fun stuff
- reference folder

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to keep things organized each post below will be split in to sections for the above checklist.

02-19-2017, 09:06 PM

Story structure

- - Plot premise - -
Mathias, a witch's son, embarks on a quest to find a fallen star to save his mother.
- > Technically he gets employed by a thief to find the star. [story a]
- - > Said thief works for a mercenary named Harrow.
- - - > Harrow wants to take over the capital called Crescent and needs the star to do so. [story b]

- character rough designs and finals - -

* click to make larger
http://i.imgur.com/Q60ePup.png (http://i.imgur.com/U7siUfk.png)

http://i.imgur.com/xuvjGEb.png (http://i.imgur.com/jqrB36s.png) http://i.imgur.com/yUDmLLK.png (http://i.imgur.com/XUpwzeZ.png) http://i.imgur.com/DgXiDTN.png (http://i.imgur.com/t31LHv2.png)

Lucille [The Witch]:
http://i.imgur.com/U7siUfk.png (http://i.imgur.com/02bw82a.png) http://i.imgur.com/4M1qcDr.png (http://i.imgur.com/UYmwgJ3.png)

http://i.imgur.com/6nmKCl5.png (http://i.imgur.com/WrGoeEA.png)


Other starseekers:

The star:

- - environment sketches / ideas - -

- Crescent is a walled capital city where everything is built ontop of everything.
- - > Perhaps into a mountain/hill?

- giant insects vai Naussicaa-esq.

- Tibet and Russian influence with a dash of celtic druid.

http://i.imgur.com/9Rho69Z.png (http://i.imgur.com/MHE6zhP.png)

- - Page design and look - -

- Full color and inked

http://i.imgur.com/5qN8xuO.png (http://i.imgur.com/NwHFVBy.png)

02-19-2017, 09:08 PM
- - Artistic and Narrative Development - -

- pages 1-7
- - > http://i.imgur.com/tAc0qpQ.png (http://i.imgur.com/fylCBZJ.png)


^ temp. To be edited


02-19-2017, 09:08 PM
placeholder! Thank you for looking, feel free to post. <3

02-23-2017, 06:06 PM
I love this, man. The character art is wonderful. I like the story premise.

I think the STARFALLEN logo could be a lot better. I know you are in the early stages of development, so maybe come up with a few more designs with the logo?

02-23-2017, 09:29 PM
Thanks man! I appreciate the kind words and feedback.
I'll see what I can do about the logo! I know I'm not 100% on it so I'll draw up some designs.

03-18-2017, 04:05 PM
Great, stylized character art. And the logo isn't terrible in my humble opinion, we'll see what variations you come up with..