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Purple_Draws
02-16-2017, 04:35 PM
Lines: Tanner Wiley. Link (http://tannerwiley.deviantart.com/art/Skye-another-Rain-character-186459101)
http://img08.deviantart.net/7744/i/2010/320/d/c/skye___another_rain_character_by_tannerwiley-d330grh.jpg

My version.
Questions: Am I combining the hard shadows and the soft shadows well?
https://68.media.tumblr.com/551929d8be7ca65987342a5e99018d6b/tumblr_olhhwyDRsD1qjk0g0o1_r1_540.jpg

SeanE
02-17-2017, 10:50 AM
not bad. You've stuffed up the arm of her jacket... and the rest of the jacket as well for that matter. Jeans are ok

Purple_Draws
03-09-2017, 11:33 AM
not bad. You've stuffed up the arm of her jacket... and the rest of the jacket as well for that matter. Jeans are ok

Thanks. By 'stuffed up' do you mean it is too busy? Too many shadows/highlights going on, or do you mean it looks too puffy?