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Cloves Rodrigues
02-13-2017, 09:53 PM
its only one page :har:

https://scontent.fcwb2-2.fna.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/16681699_10203137606238617_2366786983765958539_n.j pg?oh=9b3d7e3722116f96fcc6b546e6eaab17&oe=590390F0

therafalee
02-15-2017, 10:07 AM
E aí parceiro!

This is very well finished, but there are a few problems, like:

Panel 1_ the building on the BG is alone, it feels like the only building in the city.
Also behind that building is all white blank but inside the panels you painted it black.

Cat is my biggest problem:

_her costume ears are changing size every panel.
_In panel 1 she is definitely falling... and we can see both breasts and her butt in the same shot.
_Every panel is like she is intentionally bending over so we look at her cleavage.

virtuabutch
02-16-2017, 01:16 PM
Needs more camera movement! Batman's horn ends on a tangent with the building in panel 1. Catwoman's head overlaps panels 2 and 3-- might cause problems. You broke the 180 degree rule in a few times.

Hope that helps!