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artsnake
02-04-2017, 03:21 PM
Hey every body.
I have not posted anything here for quite a while.
I just got these pages done from a script from 2000ad who are becoming one of my favourite publishers.
The script is here http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/judge_dredd_-_pf.pdf
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage1med_1_orig.jpg
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage2med_1_orig.jpg
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage3med_1_orig.jpg
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage4med_1_orig.jpg
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage5med_orig.jpg
http://scottsassaman.weebly.com/uploads/1/8/0/6/18063613/dreddpage6med_orig.jpg
It is good to be back posting my work again.
I have been doing lots of studying and going to the Oatley Academy for digital painting.
Thanks for looking and any comments are welcome.
Scott

therafalee
02-07-2017, 10:05 AM
So this is a very interesting style you have, here are a few things I want to point out:

Page 1_ Dredd should cause a great first impression, there he is coming out as a regular cop.

Page 2_ panel 7_ There is no room for both dialogue balloons in the scene.

Page 5_Last panel_ Dredd is disappearing in the dark BG.

Page 6_ panel 4_ Should be a big impact shot.

Page 6_ panel 6_ Again Dredd does not look like the powerful figure he is.

I think a general problem here is that you are giving the same attention to every panel when some panels should stand out in a page.

Please understand that if I was listing the good stuff in your art it would be a much longer list, but we are here to see our flaws and get better right! :)

artsnake
02-07-2017, 02:32 PM
Therafalee awesome critique. Thank you so much.
This was one tough script. The number of panels per page and the density of the story was like some kind of puzzle. It is great to have someone else look at it.