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Cloves Rodrigues
01-30-2017, 02:53 PM
I did these two tryouts pages this weekend
maybe i do adjustments and maybe another page
let me know what do you think ?

https://i0.wp.com/i347.photobucket.com/albums/p443/billrods1/Spider_sample_Cloves-Rodrigues_page_02-001_zpsmok0tftk.jpg

https://i0.wp.com/i347.photobucket.com/albums/p443/billrods1/Spider_sample_Cloves-Rodrigues_page_03b-002_zpszjscfxpf.jpg

Cloves Rodrigues
01-31-2017, 05:16 AM
this is another script

https://i0.wp.com/i347.photobucket.com/albums/p443/billrods1/SPIDERMAN_CLOVES_SAMPLE_2016_PAGE-13_zpsiowrrh5c.jpg

therafalee
02-01-2017, 07:41 PM
In general very good art, I also checked your blog, Vampirella's page looks great, just a few things to point out here.
Some problem with you characters placement inside the panels:

Page one last panel: the girl seem to be bending down just so the camera can get her.
Page two second panel: there is too much empty space with just buildings, unless there is a huge ballon there what would be weird in the middle of the action.

virtuabutch
02-16-2017, 01:30 PM
The placement of Spidey's shoulder is a little off in panel 1.

Some good stuff here, much more dynamic camera and figurework here than on the Batman sample. :)