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Cloves Rodrigues
01-30-2017, 01:53 PM
I did these two tryouts pages this weekend
maybe i do adjustments and maybe another page
let me know what do you think ?



Cloves Rodrigues
01-31-2017, 04:16 AM
this is another script


02-01-2017, 06:41 PM
In general very good art, I also checked your blog, Vampirella's page looks great, just a few things to point out here.
Some problem with you characters placement inside the panels:

Page one last panel: the girl seem to be bending down just so the camera can get her.
Page two second panel: there is too much empty space with just buildings, unless there is a huge ballon there what would be weird in the middle of the action.

02-16-2017, 12:30 PM
The placement of Spidey's shoulder is a little off in panel 1.

Some good stuff here, much more dynamic camera and figurework here than on the Batman sample. :)