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virtuabutch
01-25-2017, 11:50 AM
Working on a Spider-Man/Spider-Man 2099 team up sequence. Will update as pages get pencilled!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/virtuabutch/2099_roughs_zpsj60l64z6.jpg

paul brian deberry
01-25-2017, 08:37 PM
Neato

virtuabutch
02-06-2017, 08:15 PM
Feedback welcome!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/virtuabutch/01%20copy_zpsmq4qhic5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/virtuabutch/02%20copy_zpsimc8oaje.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/virtuabutch/03%20copy_zpsuhzblffv.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/virtuabutch/04%20copy_zpsllfy65nc.jpg

wwolf
02-15-2017, 09:46 PM
Hi Virtuabutch,

Really nice pages. Like the storytelling and art style. If you ever need an inker would like the opportunity to put my touch on your beautiful work. Keep up the great work👍.

I have also posted some of my inks on here in the inker showcase if your interested in taking a look at my work.

Thanks,

William

virtuabutch
02-16-2017, 01:24 AM
I'll take a look and keep you in mind! Thanks for looking!

Alex_Neelson
02-20-2017, 06:00 AM
amazing pencils! I like this style a lot.

Renae De Liz
03-06-2017, 08:46 PM
I think you've got a great style for Spider Man, and much of the foreshortening is spot on. And so CLEAN!

I do notice there's an aversion to drawing Spider Man's butt. Seems like a silly thing, but when it comes to spandexed superheroes, if their rear ends are too detailed and obvious, it looks funny and detracts, but so does not drawing any indication of a butt at all. It's rough for Spider Man because he has so many crazy poses, it can be difficult to know what to do there, but I do feel I noted the lack of behind on pages 1, 2 and 3.

Beautiful job and keep it coming! :)

JerryREX
03-12-2017, 03:50 PM
I honestly fell in love with these pages. Everything was spot on, and now that Renae mentioned the butt thing, now I see it, but it doesn't bother me. The story telling was very clear. Keep doing what you're doing!