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noahgrahamart
01-11-2017, 09:34 PM
hay out there!
I'm sitting at a point where I've penciled a few pages for a project and want to fix them up a bit before I dive into inking them. I could use some fresh eyes on them and have found it difficult to get good specific notes but have seen some nice detailed criticism here so I figured I'd see what I can get.

Keep in mind that I penciled these with the intent of inking them myself so some looseness in spots like hair, textures etc. is simply because I find it easier to accomplish on brush or pen and don't need to communicate with another artist.

thanks

Noah

http://other00.deviantart.net/6261/o/2017/011/d/4/d49559cf5891c6c603f8eca7776ebf91.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/8ac9/o/2017/011/1/c/1cfc1839fa444687dd19a97271e1b5c8.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/cc7d/o/2016/355/9/e/9e684e92703e65bcfffa1a5db688b4aa.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/0b79/o/2016/355/d/b/dbece78e9009027d89be735f9a503eb6.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/9a31/o/2016/355/3/3/337548a6e9c38a8f5928d11152ea898d.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/b8c9/o/2016/355/1/e/1ecdc34967ae390544b0f2ea0a77b3d9.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/a90d/o/2016/355/5/2/520e455d5585ae38eb03b6ba3e775249.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/886c/o/2016/355/e/9/e9328a078fd05edcd903d852a09ee24b.jpg