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Afro
11-14-2016, 10:42 PM
What's up Sequential Art members! I've have been working on some new roughs ,so I figure I'd send them out here for viewing and just to add new material to the thread.
This is from the Next arc of The Project Geisha Series which has been really good for me to practice new things. I'll post up new images once this gets in color.

The first graphic novel Project Geisha Fearless is out and can be purchased at the Ivorycomics.com website.

Again thanks for looking





http://i1094.photobucket.com/albums/i454/eivory504/geisha%203%20pg001.jpg (http://s1094.photobucket.com/user/eivory504/media/geisha%203%20pg001.jpg.html)

http://i1094.photobucket.com/albums/i454/eivory504/Geisha%203%20pg%202.jpg (http://s1094.photobucket.com/user/eivory504/media/Geisha%203%20pg%202.jpg.html)

http://i1094.photobucket.com/albums/i454/eivory504/geisha%203%20pg003.jpg (http://s1094.photobucket.com/user/eivory504/media/geisha%203%20pg003.jpg.html)


http://i1094.photobucket.com/albums/i454/eivory504/geisha%203%20pg004.jpg (http://s1094.photobucket.com/user/eivory504/media/geisha%203%20pg004.jpg.html)

jorgezeraba
11-15-2016, 10:50 PM
I appreciate the labor you put into these pages.
But for me they are unclear, I can't follow what is happening on any of the pages.
There needs to be clarity, and perhaps pulling back on using crazing "camera" angles can help tell the story visually.

Afro
11-16-2016, 05:15 PM
Thanks Jorge,

I'm sorry that it seems unclear. I need to work on making the lines more distinct. I didn't really think my angles were all that crazy. But some experiment does happen.

Afro
11-18-2016, 03:17 AM
Hey just want to thank those that have been clicking on the link and checking out the art much appreciated!