Feedback for my comics?

[junabeez]

Hey everyone, my name is Jun Baik. I've recently decided to get back to drawing comics again after college, and started to draw some pages for an idea I had.

I was wondering if I could get some honest opinions/feedback on them, to see if I can improve upon them.

http://i.imgur.com/BXaNP0p.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/loLVoSi.jpg

[baixam]

Good establishing shoot, smooth transitions. Only criticism: panel with the giant spider, I guess it warns us of a danger, in contrast with the character, just awaken. But in my opinion it doesn't work well. You cut the scene very abruptly. I think it works better if you put that at the end of the page. But in general nice work

[TimR]

I find it to be a very appealing drawing style.. The logo and first panel are especially strong.

[jorgezeraba]

My main issue is the second page.
I would have removed, the second panel on page 2, and drew the upper half of page 2 with 3 vertical panels. And drew the spider creature and the tent in a way that connected the elements visually a bit more.