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junabeez
10-31-2016, 03:29 AM
Hey everyone, my name is Jun Baik. I've recently decided to get back to drawing comics again after college, and started to draw some pages for an idea I had.
I was wondering if I could get some honest opinions/feedback on them, to see if I can improve upon them.
http://i.imgur.com/BXaNP0p.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/loLVoSi.jpg
baixam
10-31-2016, 07:02 AM
Good establishing shoot, smooth transitions. Only criticism: panel with the giant spider, I guess it warns us of a danger, in contrast with the character, just awaken. But in my opinion it doesn't work well. You cut the scene very abruptly. I think it works better if you put that at the end of the page. But in general nice work
I find it to be a very appealing drawing style.. The logo and first panel are especially strong.
jorgezeraba
10-31-2016, 10:20 PM
My main issue is the second page.
I would have removed, the second panel on page 2, and drew the upper half of page 2 with 3 vertical panels. And drew the spider creature and the tent in a way that connected the elements visually a bit more.
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