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sweetmurwanti
10-30-2016, 07:17 PM
Also looking for new sequential commissions, contact me at : sikamurti1@gmail.com for inquiries

http://sikamurti.deviantart.com/gallery/

MYTH

http://img01.deviantart.net/2e1b/i/2016/301/e/2/myth_page_1_by_sikamurti-dami12g.jpg


http://pre07.deviantart.net/53c6/th/pre/i/2016/301/5/3/myth_page_2_by_sikamurti-damhzh5.jpg


http://pre00.deviantart.net/08fc/th/pre/i/2016/301/2/6/myth_page_3_by_sikamurti-damhzbg.jpg



http://pre15.deviantart.net/9f43/th/pre/i/2016/301/d/e/myth_page_4_by_sikamurti-damhz59.jpg


http://pre02.deviantart.net/40a5/th/pre/i/2016/301/1/1/myth_page_5_by_sikamurti-damhyxy.jpg


http://pre03.deviantart.net/2674/th/pre/i/2016/301/3/4/myth_page_6_by_sikamurti-damhyov.jpg


http://sikamurti.deviantart.com/gallery/

sweetmurwanti
10-30-2016, 07:25 PM
UBERMENSCH

http://pre09.deviantart.net/101f/th/pre/i/2016/271/a/a/ubermensch_page_1_by_sikamurti-daj8q3w.jpg


http://pre06.deviantart.net/fc78/th/pre/i/2016/271/4/7/ubermensch_page_2_by_sikamurti-daj8pw7.jpg


http://pre00.deviantart.net/8d93/th/pre/i/2016/271/8/3/ubermensch_page_3_by_sikamurti-daj8pmj.jpg



http://pre05.deviantart.net/736f/th/pre/i/2016/271/6/4/ubermensch_page_4_by_sikamurti-daj8pec.jpg



http://pre05.deviantart.net/736f/th/pre/i/2016/271/6/4/ubermensch_page_4_by_sikamurti-daj8pec.jpg



http://pre15.deviantart.net/57b9/th/pre/i/2016/271/1/1/ubermensch_page_5_by_sikamurti-daj8p5s.jpg



http://pre00.deviantart.net/eae0/th/pre/i/2016/271/a/3/ubermensch_page_6_by_sikamurti-daj8p04.jpg



http://pre05.deviantart.net/15b5/th/pre/i/2016/271/d/4/ubermensch_page_7_by_sikamurti-daj8opb.jpg

DJA
10-31-2016, 02:51 AM
Looks good man.

baixam
10-31-2016, 08:17 AM
Very good in general. Only criticism: Page C4, in my opinion it looks like he runs TO the bullies ( he looks at us and he runs to us, the bullies). Transition between that panel and the lockers could be smoother, ( a couple of panels running, close up of the bullies " I'll catch you"

cesare2009
11-01-2016, 10:10 PM
I see an excellent progression in the use of blacks and in the fluidity of the action in the later pages....the figures have loosened up nicely!

are you taking lessons from someone?

sevans
11-01-2016, 11:19 PM
The speed lines on the truck should be flowing the other way. Looks like the truck is reversing quickly.

sweetmurwanti
11-02-2016, 09:40 AM
Thanks DJA.

sweetmurwanti
11-02-2016, 09:41 AM
Thanks for critics and comment everyone.