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david_landi
10-26-2016, 08:42 PM
Hi everyone, I wanted to show a spiderman 6 page sample from a while ago.

I had this reviewed by Batman Europa co-writer Matteo Casali and Amazing Spiderman regular artist Giuseppe Camuncoli...who completely destroyed my work! :slap:

I wanted to show them anyway and get some feedbacks

thanks in advance!

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TheDeeMan
10-26-2016, 09:43 PM
Not seeing anything.

Dee

baixam
10-27-2016, 07:40 AM
It doesn't show

david_landi
10-27-2016, 02:25 PM
Damn..I double checked it and still doesnt work..I'll fix that asap

david_landi
10-27-2016, 02:32 PM
I can see them now..can you?

Defpotec
10-27-2016, 04:02 PM
Negative

Bishop
10-27-2016, 04:07 PM
Sharing Dropbox links won't work. You need to post a link to an image sharing site or something like that. If your links don't end in .jpg, .gif, or some other image extension the [img] tags will not work.

sevans
10-27-2016, 06:37 PM
Can't see them.

When you say completely destroyed them.... do you mean he pointed out the areas with issues, added constructive criticism and could explain the problems?

david_landi
10-28-2016, 03:33 AM
Ok thanks once again bishop!

Yes they showed me where I made mistakes...mainly composition issues, top many object going out of panel, and too many details that make the pages difficult to understand.

I guess I should have done them a bit less the Marvel way.

I'll fix this soon.