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09-06-2016, 04:32 AM
Hi guys,
just wanted to share with you my batman sample sequential art.
hope you guys like.
critiques and comments are welcome!

more art here at my deviantart

http://img02.deviantart.net/f806/i/2016/201/a/2/batman_crusader_sample_page_1_by_emmanuelxerxjavie r-daap655.jpg

http://img06.deviantart.net/2e9e/i/2016/201/5/2/batman_crusader_sample_page_3_by_emmanuelxerxjavie r-daap6v1.jpg

http://img10.deviantart.net/5e63/i/2016/201/3/a/batman_crusader_sample_page_4_by_emmanuelxerxjavie r-daap722.jpg

http://img03.deviantart.net/df10/i/2016/201/d/6/batman_crusader_sample_page_5_by_emmanuelxerxjavie r-daap77b.jpg

09-06-2016, 10:58 AM
These are cool. You should apply to http://forums.millarworld.tv/t/millarworld-annual-2017-artist-submission-thread/7737

09-08-2016, 05:18 AM
Not much to crit here but I always enjoy it when you post. Great artwork as usual Emmanuel :)

09-10-2016, 10:54 PM
Beautiful, clean storytelling. Great work!

09-11-2016, 11:15 AM
Definitely professional work! :thumbs:

09-11-2016, 01:28 PM
Beautiful work! The drawing is well-executed, the story-telling is clear, the gestures and expressions add a lot to the work. I like the athletic-but-not-gigantic build you've given Batman; I don't like it when he looks like Mr. Olympia.

The only tiny critique I can offer is that the design of the sword that the bad guy (sorry, I don't know this character) is using is inconsistent. The way it looks in the splash panel is especially off compared to its other appearances, with the up-turned quillons and machete-like shape.

09-15-2016, 11:33 AM
thanks Newt...
you're right, good eye! i have to improve on my weapon drawing.... will definitely take note to that :). thanks!.

09-20-2016, 11:54 AM
I like these a lot. Awesome work.


09-22-2016, 06:26 AM
Love the pages, good job man! You're very near to professional level IMO. I'd like to see them inked...are you going to do it?