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Raventongue
08-30-2016, 09:18 PM
http://other00.deviantart.net/9e12/o/2016/243/7/3/737f31d56cb4dacabb40aa3db6425ae9.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/541e/o/2016/243/d/f/df9ac307606152151b0933d5887b48e7.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/07cb/o/2016/243/9/7/97831a4a912c48b64f1b5705e5dd120e.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/77ce/o/2016/243/b/3/b3cc03fccac6c381ee1b2914c27f2a62.jpg

http://other00.deviantart.net/6c39/o/2016/243/b/7/b7eee50c3f1bb7be3ef7c988f2aa4796.jpg

DarkHalf05
08-30-2016, 11:48 PM
Overall I think everything looks pretty good. Excellent use of blacks. The inks look like they took quite some time to complete.

My only thought is the first panel on page 3, Dare Devil is dropping in with a flying sidekick on the gunman. The panel of him jumping out the window as well as the trajectory of the stick indicate that he was below him up to that point. By having him kicking downward seems like he teleported up to drop in. I think that having him kick upward may solve that. Just a thought.

Love the expression work, by the way.

Raventongue
08-31-2016, 11:03 AM
@DarkHalf05 thanks for the comment, man! I appreciate that. What you said made sense. I will definitely keep that in mind next time. :)

Steve Colle
09-05-2016, 10:50 PM
There is a lot to talk about with regards to these pages. More than anything, I would want to see the script that you worked from in drawing this out, mainly because I'd like to tear a strip from the writer who decided 15 panels on the first (or ANY) page was a "good idea". Second, I would want to have a look at your pencils pre-inking so I could discuss areas that needed to be worked on in that stage. Because you have done inks over said pencils, it makes it hard to focus on each aspect of the samples.

Can you provide us with the script?