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07-19-2016, 12:52 AM

07-19-2016, 01:11 PM
Wow!! I LOVE this!!!

07-21-2016, 02:22 PM
thanks dadams595...i appreciate the kind words.

Samuel Bono
07-22-2016, 11:03 AM
Wow!! Beautiful!!

07-22-2016, 02:07 PM
Love the McFarlane influenced. Good pencils. Show us more, pleeeease...:w00t:

The Spirit
07-23-2016, 08:30 AM
Very nice and clean!

07-24-2016, 11:57 PM
thanks all....more coming.

07-25-2016, 01:28 AM
Hey, great page!

I like the layout, including the big panel 4 going behind and beyond the first three panels. Hulk also looks great, and I see the McFarlane homage, with the placement of Hulk's nose, and a few Todd-like lines beneath his mouth, though in general, I wouldn't say this is a style that resembles Todd.

The one big area I see for improvement is panel 1. The guy has no eyelids. Even if he's Asian, he'd have eyelids, but the lack of them really is striking to me, and I find it quite jarring.

In the same panel, beneath his mustache is a white area. Are those his teeth? Because if so, it's just a straight line, with no indication of actual teeth, as you showed quite nicely in panel 3. Is it his upper lip? If so, I think it can be improved. I don't know the names of all of these tiny parts of the face - sorry.

Anyway, as a whole, the page is great! I love the Hulk, and his hands are very nicely drawn. Great nails, though I always imagined his fingernails would be pretty gnarly and jacked up.

I hope you add some eyelids to that guy in panel 1. That's my biggest critique.

Great job! :thumbs:

07-26-2016, 12:27 PM
if the only issue you have is a couple of eyelids, i'll take it as a win!....thanks for taking a look and commenting. i appreciate it.