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reyesart
07-01-2016, 07:23 PM
I'll update this thread with three more pages soon and lettered version soon. Here are the first three pages to issue one of Veil Of Night with screenwriter Alberto Veloso. More info here (http://jimmyreyes.deviantart.com)

http://img07.deviantart.net/02c2/i/2016/183/2/2/veil_of_night__1_by_jimmyreyes-da8ib2z.jpg
http://img09.deviantart.net/71e5/i/2016/183/6/8/veil_of_night__1_by_jimmyreyes-da8iat9.jpg
http://img07.deviantart.net/983e/i/2016/183/3/9/veil_of_night__1_by_jimmyreyes-da8iads.jpg

DJA
07-01-2016, 09:46 PM
Looks cool. Maybe you should show the action of the wolf opening the door. Then when he changes back to a guy, he seems to shrink in size in panel 1 page 3.

reyesart
07-02-2016, 04:39 AM
Thanks for the extra eye I'll adjust his size and update it soon. Note) the wolves in this book are large.

reyesart
07-06-2016, 12:50 AM
Here is page three Revised Version. I could have just photoshopped the first panel but decided to redraw it and change the rendering. I also decided to pull the camera back in the second panel to establish where they are to each other in the environment as man sniffs the air.

http://img05.deviantart.net/b900/i/2016/187/a/8/veil_of_night_1_page_3_revised_by_jimmyreyes-da91r7b.jpg

DJA
07-06-2016, 03:20 AM
Not showing up for me bud.

Bishop
07-06-2016, 08:24 AM
Your image links appear to be dead. I tried to paste them into my browser even and DA said they do not exist...

reyesart
07-11-2016, 01:00 AM
I apologize if the images are not showing they are on my deviant art page (http://jimmyreyesdeviantart.com)
page 4
http://img03.deviantart.net/af1c/i/2016/192/c/4/veil_of_night_1_page_4_by_jimmyreyes-da9o6xm.jpg