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DavyJ
06-08-2016, 07:36 PM
Hi there.

I've been working on a one-off comic.

The story is about on how a man in modern Japan goes on to traveling all the way to Mt. Fuji into killing himself.

So far all that's complete is the cover in ink.

http://i1379.photobucket.com/albums/ah156/Davy_Jae/Mobile%20Uploads/image_zpsei7sfwi2.jpeg (http://s1379.photobucket.com/user/Davy_Jae/media/Mobile%20Uploads/image_zpsei7sfwi2.jpeg.html)

Please feel free to leave profesional critique and thank you for your time reading this forum.

TeleKill
06-09-2016, 03:04 AM
Overall I like it. At first I didn't notice the noose, it blended in with the details on the tree. But if this is the cover, I imagine that maybe the noose will be laid over the book title. right?

Areocube
06-09-2016, 09:23 AM
That's some great detail work.

I was wondering if it might have been more dynamic to show the anguish in the Man's face, as opposed to covering his face with hand?

DavyJ
06-10-2016, 01:39 PM
Overall I like it. At first I didn't notice the noose, it blended in with the details on the tree. But if this is the cover, I imagine that maybe the noose will be laid over the book title. right?

Cheers for the feedback.

The noose will definitly overlap the title.