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midknight
06-02-2016, 11:00 AM
http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/43947399cb0b2ff85177e7cbb93294bc1195911334.jpg

http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/e763d17fd2bb408f2ec36ae26f9cb5991522272249.jpg

http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/0afdf712074c308070cce7de8bc240261922705881.jpg

http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/f1f4cd4830fb9d1e2cd0cd531a970c00105791437.jpg

http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/0315639db33b798d782eb311acf009b7604324973.jpg

http://cataclysm.webcomic.ws/images/comics/90/fd53ba81d962090f850b34d0eb183ed9131068322.jpg

DJA
06-02-2016, 11:41 AM
Good stuff. Dig your style and line work.

MattTriano
06-11-2016, 10:00 PM
Nicely done. Some odd cropping of faces and heads, awkward panel layering that doesn't strengthen your compositions. Impossible to ink but not important if you ink yourself or paint over these.

Are you published? If yes, how was the work finished for print?

Morganza
06-11-2016, 11:56 PM
Great work Armando, I admire your penciling ability.

AdWilliams
06-12-2016, 01:43 AM
Really great work. I like the expressiveness of each character.

Renae De Liz
06-12-2016, 10:19 PM
I love the expressions and that the characters have their own unique characteristics (many comics are very cut and paste with their characters).

I do agree about the panel layouts and some of the cropping seems a little off, but I'm sure that'll work itself out as you go.

Really great job! :)

emmanuelxerxjavier
06-13-2016, 05:12 AM
looks awesome sequentials, good pacing and easy to follow story telling.

pandayboss
06-13-2016, 09:59 PM
Wow! Amazing work!!