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franmoyano
05-23-2016, 01:36 PM
This is a job that I did for a graphic novel of terror.

My facebook page:
https://www.facebook.com/Juan-Francisco-Moyano-666852250020687/



Thanks.

http://i.imgur.com/ISbEBs8.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/64pwMbY.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/oUXrt3s.jpg

Echaelon
05-26-2016, 05:30 AM
Some nice work. I like the style and it sets the setting of this story.

Highlights for me are your consistent good use of having points of interest in the foreground background in many panels and also the expression of the character in the last panel of page 2 as he is hit by the arrow.

The only 2 areas I could pick for improvement were page 1 panel 8, the woman's face doesn't look right, I think its the position of the nose in relation to the perspective angle of her face... I think something doesn't look quite right.

The other area is the very last panel. In all your other backgrounds it looks like you drew them in yourself however for this big splash moment it looks like you took a photo (which has had some treatment) and shopped it into the background. As its a big page its noticeable and also takes away from your style which is consistent in the other pages.

Other than that, nice work.

Afro
05-27-2016, 11:38 PM
It's pretty solid, my only thing is who shot the guy with the arrow? If it's the guy in the last page he doesn't have a bow. But if it's showing various pages I get that.