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Toondoctor
04-28-2016, 09:12 AM
This is the latest page from Johnny Bullet my 1970s era strip about a man and his ride.

http://johnnybullet.thecomicseries.com/images/comics/108/45f9ea0e6014683e1b041f5b67ed7837695764136.jpg

scarletwingskaili
04-29-2016, 04:09 AM
I like the sudden stop in the last panel. Overall I feel the landscape format works really well for this script.
Does the police car show up anywhere else? Since you place some attention to the police car in the first panel, it would be nice if it was an element throughout the strip.

Toondoctor
04-29-2016, 11:24 AM
Thanks for the nice comments! The Sheriff and his car are part of the chase thereafter! The new pages are up and you do see him take part of fun!