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04-21-2016, 10:00 PM
Hi! It has been a REALLY long time since I posted on DW! Anyway, here is a part of a short story sample I made a few months ago. Any comments, critiques or whatever would be appreciated. If you want, you can also check out my social media links below.

As a note: the first 3 are in order and the 4th is just a random page that I like. Thanks for looking!

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%201%20_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%201%20_blackwhite.jpg.html)

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%202%20_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%202%20_blackwhite.jpg.html)

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%203%20_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%203%20_blackwhite.jpg.html)

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%2012_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%2012_blackwhite.jpg.html)

04-22-2016, 02:21 PM
Love it. Has the potential to be a nice webcomic!

K.E. Woolfork
04-23-2016, 12:56 AM
I can't put my finger on who this reminds me of, but looks great! This is Image quality, print ready work.

paul brian deberry
04-23-2016, 03:45 PM
Nice stuff.

04-23-2016, 07:31 PM
fun pages.
Love to see more.

04-26-2016, 02:09 AM
This is fun! I dig it.

05-03-2016, 05:46 PM
Thanks for the kind comments, everybody. I thought I would keep posting more pages so here's pages 4 and 5.

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%204%20_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%204%20_blackwhite.jpg.html)

http://i1268.photobucket.com/albums/jj574/aaronp5/Ulricses%205_blackwhite.jpg (http://s1268.photobucket.com/user/aaronp5/media/Ulricses%205_blackwhite.jpg.html)

05-04-2016, 08:17 AM
These are fantastic. You're a gifted storyteller. I love the Euro influence, clean and smart. Great gestures, environments, characters.

I want to read this. Is it online? Are you shopping it to publishers?

05-08-2016, 03:30 PM
Matt, thank you! You can start reading all sixteen pages of the story (with words and colors) here: http://aaronpalsmeier.tumblr.com/post/111685308675/tales-of-great-ulricses-yool-rik-seez-a-mash-up Writing isn't my strong suit...yet, but I hope you enjoy it. I also have some other webcomics on that site too.

To be honest, I just wrote it as an experiment and to use as a sample at Cons and online. I'm not sure what else I could do with it.