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tim1961
03-13-2016, 04:49 PM
... sorry to hog the limelight with two posts back to back but this one's more recent. Strega's the story set in the 'Dungeons and Dragons' mode, with magic, warlords, and lots of sword battles!

Here's the first three pages. You can follow the story as it unfolds here. (http://www.timsnotebook.com/comics_strega.html)

http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/str_1.1.jpg

http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/str_1.2.jpg

http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/str_1.3.jpg

paul brian deberry
03-13-2016, 09:38 PM
nice work

Dariru
03-17-2016, 11:54 AM
Very cool! I love the borders!

sevans
03-17-2016, 02:55 PM
I will disagree about the borders, too bright, grab my attention too much and after a few more pages will just feel like a gimmick.

The rest of the artwork, has the right tone and feel for the content, and looks well drawn.
Over all, nice, entertaining pages.

Bishop
03-17-2016, 05:29 PM
I will disagree about the borders, too bright, grab my attention too much and after a few more pages will just feel like a gimmick.

The rest of the artwork, has the right tone and feel for the content, and looks well drawn.
Over all, nice, entertaining pages.

I agree. I like the design of the borders, but the way they are colored they become the central focus of the page since the artwork is a relatively muted palette.

Sully
03-18-2016, 09:38 AM
The borders being used a bit more sparingly is a sentiment I can echo, but I don't want to focus on that.

Great work, and especially, awesome colors.

tim1961
03-26-2016, 09:49 PM
Strega has been changed as per some of your suggestions. Since the images are linked to my site
they show the latest version. Thanks again! (see above)

Once again, the story can be found on my website (http://www.timsnotebook.com/comics_strega)