View Full Version : Mayfield Eight.

03-13-2016, 03:44 PM
"A cop wants his drugs. A drug dealer wants him dead."

Here's the cover and a few pages -out of sequence- in to show you the style. To see the whole story from start to finish to go to my site. (http://www.timsnotebook.com/comics_mayfield.html)




paul brian deberry
03-13-2016, 08:40 PM

mmmm, comics!!!

Stewart Vernon
03-13-2016, 11:56 PM
I like the look of this. Good color selection as well.

03-14-2016, 12:09 AM
Thanks, Stewart, and P.B. DeBerry. Quick question: later on in the story the guy in the yellow jacket (Cal) gets into a major altercation on a pool table with the head biker guy (Slade). In my script so far Slade's going to pull out a switch blade on Cal while he's down on the pool table and Slade's clenched hand at his throat. I was thinking of changing the weapon to Slade swinging a motorcycle chain and WHAM WHAM Cal has to flinch right then flinch left.

What do you like better? Switch blade or motorcycle drive chain?

Stewart Vernon
03-14-2016, 02:53 AM
Depending on how you pull it off (pun semi-intended) I think I'd prefer the chain. I'm not a knife person, but also I think the chain would be something different than usual.

paul brian deberry
03-14-2016, 06:50 PM
the chain would be cooler. harder to draw.

03-14-2016, 08:17 PM
Altercation at a pool table..... the cue is already nearby.
Hit em with the cue stick. Practical.

But a chain could look cooler.

03-14-2016, 11:20 PM
Looks really good!

03-15-2016, 03:52 PM
Agreed with the majority. Nice artwork, solid story, and the colors really make it all stand out.