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MadventureMan
02-01-2016, 03:42 AM
So this is my first post here ... scared as s..t.

It should be no surprise for you, but yes, I've made a novel. A graphic novel. I know I am doomed. ;-)

And it is even worse. I am industrial designer and that makes this book's visual experience bit unusual. It is probably more "concept art" with bubbles rather than traditional "ink and color".

Just see for yourself. And let me know what you think! Any feedback is more than welcome ... thanks in advance!

Walkthrough: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DyipWXKg2tg


Some art and sample pages:
http://horseville.net/permalink/LR_tower_theme.619.jpg
http://horseville.net/permalink/LR_03.jpg
http://horseville.net/permalink/02_Page_07.jpg
http://horseville.net/permalink/02_Page_11.jpg

much more here: https://www.facebook.com/MachinesOfAdventure/

Bishop
02-01-2016, 08:50 AM
Whoa. I love the visuals! That opening page is beautiful. Your lettering could use some work, but I'm hardly the person to give tips on that.

Good work!

sevans
02-01-2016, 06:10 PM
That first image is stunning.
The text sits 'too heavy' on the page IMO.

Maybe you could make the white box slightly transparent, might not be so jarring.
Just an idea.

mal
02-25-2016, 01:29 PM
Looks very interesting! The image links here were broken but I checked out the Youtube vid...

MadventureMan
02-26-2016, 09:35 AM
sorry everyone for broken links!
the webpage was being updated meanwhile ... all should be here now: http://www.machinesofadventure.com

btw ... Drone Dreams are free on Amazon until this Saturday, so if you manage to get it, please leave some nice world there ;-)

and thanks everyone for your kind words!

MadventureMan
02-26-2016, 09:45 AM
Re-posting images here again asI can't edit the starting entry

http://www.machinesofadventure.com/styled-4/files/02_page_07.jpg
http://www.machinesofadventure.com/styled-4/files/09_page_2.jpg
http://www.machinesofadventure.com/styled-4/files/05_page_07.jpg