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jpgaltmiller
08-22-2015, 03:15 AM
Hey guys,

Thanks for the comments on the last page I posted. Here's another: any thoughts?

http://lesbianzombies.com/lz%20p0307_lettertest.jpg

JimCampbell
08-22-2015, 07:12 AM
That's all pretty good, except for panel 4, where you decide to put lettering all over the guy's face, when it can easily fit in the dead-ish space on the left of panel…

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb36/jimcampbell2000/lz%20p0307_lettertest_NOTE_zps9jlymud2.jpg

Cheers

Jim

jpgaltmiller
08-22-2015, 02:12 PM
Heh, yeah I thought it might be too squished. But that makes sense.

Thanks.

Stewart Vernon
08-22-2015, 04:33 PM
Agree with Jim... it stands out even more because that's the only panel you did that with the balloons (having them so far away with really long tails).

jpgaltmiller
08-22-2015, 08:08 PM
Plus, I realize now, having the balloons that far right side of panel, the eye path almost skips the character's expression. Whereas drawn in on the left side of panel, eye travel from balloon to balloon runs right over the comical expression.

Thanks again, guys.

Comics Commando
09-05-2015, 03:16 PM
Yeah, fix that panel 4 and you're golden. Otherwise, very decent job.


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