View Full Version : Murder One, 10 pg Horror Comic!

07-27-2015, 02:52 PM
Hey guys!

Recently wrote a 10 page horror comic called "Murder One", which was drawn and colored by the amazing Federico De Luca and lettered by the incomparable ET Dollman. Would love to hear your feedback and thoughts!


07-27-2015, 04:07 PM
Great short! The art is gorgeous, colors are great, and the writing is sharp. Awesome job!

Blue Wolf
07-27-2015, 04:19 PM
I really, really like the flashback story. Coloring is cool, I dig the reds and the golds in the flashbacks. Lettering is on point. I'm not 100% sure I'm in love with the bookend "witness" bit, but all in all really cool stuff.

07-28-2015, 12:06 PM
Thanks guys! Totally indebted to the monumental work of Federico and ET, who made the thing look professional in spite of my fumblings.

Blue Wolf, it's funny how these things go; my favorite line/piece of the whole story is the line about witness/martyr in the original Greek. It's fairly esoteric and unknown but true, and wonderfully fitting for that 'twist' and the whole concept.

Just goes to show that a writer's favorite is rarely an audience's!

07-29-2015, 07:26 AM
Great work, well written and brilliant sequential art. Federico De Luca really captured an evil looking character.

angry pencil
08-03-2015, 09:12 AM
Yeah this is nice. Love the mood and tone of this. Good job. Keep doing what your doing.

08-03-2015, 11:41 AM
Thanks guys! Super kind!

08-17-2015, 10:22 PM
Agree, this short is fantastic!