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paul brian deberry
02-19-2015, 01:09 AM
Howdy lettering fiends.

I have ANOTHER lettering activity for you.

Art by Joe Simmons. Coloring by Joe Badon. Words lovely words by Some Guy Named Paul.

Deadline is Monday 23rd fave fun.

TITLE: MILK RUN CREDITS PAUL D JOIE S AND JOE B

Panel 1 Credits & Title

Panel 2 - Hero: Wrong turn!

Panel 3- 5 - NO COPY

Panel 6 - 9 - (Over and Over) HAHA! HAHA! HAHA! HAHA! HAHA! HAHA!

Panel 10 - Hero - Not Good!

Panel 11 - (More) HAHA! HAHA!

Panel 12 - No Copy

Panel 13 - (Off panel) Where's the Milk, Paul?

Panel 14 - Hero - I'm sorry hun, I must have lost it along the way.

Panel 15 - Hero - Not Good!

paul brian deberry
02-19-2015, 01:17 AM
Post work here and we'll give you some feedback.

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2015/049/0/b/one_pager_pb_and_j_by_badpablo-d8im6ub.jpg

larger image attached at the bottom to download.

symulachra
02-21-2015, 10:41 AM
Really cool page. Thanks for doing this, Paul.

http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2015/052/7/4/milk_run_by_symulachra-d8iwu5q.jpg

symulachra
02-21-2015, 11:23 AM
Uh-oh. I just noticed. Did I misinterpret the panel flow? From panel 10 I went down instead of right. They both kind of make sense to me, but the first made more sense to me as it was my first instinct to go down from panel 10 (also in context with the text).

I guess you guys'll let me know if I'm wrong. :-]

paul brian deberry
02-22-2015, 02:35 PM
The way you did the HAHAH is a stroke of brilliance. Wish I thought of that.

Nah, you nailed the follow. I would suggest you mask the balloon on the next to last panel behind JR head.

I like it! Great job.

paul brian deberry
02-22-2015, 02:51 PM
and my submission

http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2015/053/b/a/one_pager_pb_and_j_by_badpablo-d8j3dca.jpg

symulachra
02-23-2015, 12:01 PM
Thank you. Was a nice page to letter.

Tomas M91
02-26-2015, 11:41 PM
Been a while since I've uploaded, hope this looks cool :)

Great stuff already uploaded

http://i.imgur.com/pzdeHNi.jpg

paul brian deberry
02-27-2015, 11:54 AM
Way to go Tomas!

I would just say on that second to last panel, try masking the balloon behind JR and our heroes head.

Tomas M91
02-27-2015, 10:17 PM
I'll remember that for the next one, don't want to clog up with constant repostings :)

Schuyler
03-01-2015, 02:04 PM
I wanted to say that symulachra did the coolest thing with the hahahas. Breaking borders and leading the eye down the page. No one else thought of, or tried that. Kudos, symulachra!

steel
03-05-2015, 06:01 PM
Can any of you work for $10/page?

Tomas M91
03-05-2015, 07:55 PM
Can any of you work for $10/page?

Looking to hire people goes into the help wanted section, though prepared to get a lot emails from letterers. I guess you were trying to avoid that since there are only a few of us using the lettering thread