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JOinks
10-08-2014, 08:25 PM
Been a while. Figured I'd start posting some stuff and see what I can improve on. This one is by Marcio Abreu.

Inks:
http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/279/3/c/captain_america_vs__modok_inks_by_jo_ink-d81s9q8.jpg

Pencils:
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/118/1/f/m_o_d_o_k_by_marcioabreu7-d7gckb8.jpg

Charles
10-10-2014, 02:11 AM
Gorgeous!

Kevinlearn
10-10-2014, 10:36 AM
Nice Job!

JOinks
10-10-2014, 12:00 PM
Gorgeous!

Thanks!

JOinks
10-10-2014, 12:01 PM
Nice Job!

Thank you!

gizroc2
10-19-2014, 01:47 PM
It was in the pencils, as well, so it's hard to fault you. But I think it's a little TOO detailed in some areas, like Modok's face and his chair. There's a good chance that some of the parallel lines there will fill in when printed, or even when viewed online. My opinion, from sad experience.

It might have been nice to add a little more thick'n'thin to contour lines, as well.

No doubt you are very skilled; it's just a matter of choices. IMO... :)

JOinks
10-25-2014, 11:11 AM
It was in the pencils, as well, so it's hard to fault you. But I think it's a little TOO detailed in some areas, like Modok's face and his chair. There's a good chance that some of the parallel lines there will fill in when printed, or even when viewed online. My opinion, from sad experience.

It might have been nice to add a little more thick'n'thin to contour lines, as well.

No doubt you are very skilled; it's just a matter of choices. IMO... :)

No worries mate I get what your saying. Thanks for the feedback! :D

VANDAL
11-04-2014, 01:37 PM
Actually in the pencils Modok looks fine. It's Cap's face that looks all wrong. I love Abreu's work but as an inker when I see Cap's face in this one, he looks like a black man. You followed the lines but I personally would have made Cap's face much more simple. As it stands both in pencils and inks it is WAY over rendered.

Duane Korslund
11-04-2014, 01:41 PM
Actually in the pencils Modok looks fine. It's Cap's face that looks all wrong. I love Abreu's work but as an inker when I see Cap's face in this one, he looks like a black man. You followed the lines but I personally would have made Cap's face much more simple. As it stands both in pencils and inks it is WAY over rendered.


I agree...a little much on Caps face.

JOinks
11-08-2014, 01:37 PM
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind next time! :D