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grumpyfatfury
09-26-2014, 08:19 PM
A WW commission with pencils by the uber-talented Aberrant Kitty (AberrantKitty.deviantart.com)

A few sequential pages from an upcoming book tentatively titles The Adventures of The Grenadier with pencils by graphite-guru Ron Joseph (RONJOSEPH-ARTIST.deviantart.com)

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/267/6/6/wonderwoman_commission_by_jk5_inks-d80cr1d.jpg

http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/267/7/5/the_grenadier___page_03_by_jk5_inks-d80cpxc.jpg

http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/267/e/6/the_grenadier___page_06_by_jk5_inks-d80cpt0.jpg

http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/267/d/1/the_grenadier___page_10_by_jk5_inks-d80cpgt.jpg

Cheers,
J

Redking84
10-05-2014, 06:29 PM
Very clean inks, could you attach the original pencils too?

grumpyfatfury
10-07-2014, 10:31 AM
Very clean inks, could you attach the original pencils too?

Thank you.

Sure; here's links to the penciled pages:

http://fav.me/d7od02q

http://fav.me/d7qsv0v

http://fav.me/d7rs78u

Cheers,
J

gizroc2
10-19-2014, 01:58 PM
I think the original pencils were over-rendered and blacks could have been spotted better by the penciler. Too many figures are not adequately "separated". But I think you did a good job with what you had, which were very specific.

I DO especially like WW, but again the figure has proportion issues. But your line work here is VERY clean and fluid. Nice job!

Ghost
10-31-2014, 10:17 AM
Nice inks! I think you did so well on the Grenadier Id rather read it in black & white instead of with color.