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rhino1987
09-13-2013, 07:50 AM
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-MLUZ4C7GgJQ/UjLtE1FmRkI/AAAAAAAAA0Y/jjJthLPUAt0/s1600/Activtiy14--Version1.jpg

lordmagnusen
09-13-2013, 10:09 AM
Looks good... remember, it's "Prologue", not "Proloque".

rhino1987
09-13-2013, 10:47 AM
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-bpsm07jfTcA/UjMW_nEZEJI/AAAAAAAAA0o/N4XTRUAucG0/s1600/Activtiy14--Version-2.jpg

Jeff LeBlanc
09-13-2013, 05:48 PM
Text is almost certainly too small. The color of the text boxes is acting like camouflage; it's sometimes hard to spot the captions at all, especially in the top panel.

I like the placement, except for the first two captions, which look like they are part of the building, sticking up and hanging down.

rhino1987
09-16-2013, 11:42 AM
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-CR-iW1eP6UE/UjcYTKsBzsI/AAAAAAAAA04/SyJEzs7n5rY/s1600/Activtiy14--Version2.jpg