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JOinks
09-09-2013, 05:08 PM
Penciled by Mike Bowden http://mikebowden.deviantart.com/

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/252/9/4/colossus_vs__juggernaut_inks_by_josh_oakes-d6lnw90.jpg

johnjohn
09-09-2013, 05:29 PM
Nice clean look

krosis
09-10-2013, 06:07 PM
wow.. that's nice work.

I personally would have done the feathering on the outer border a little heavier.. but only from a style preference.. nothing wrong with how it's done here.

j giar
09-11-2013, 09:06 AM
Very clean...
Something to look at....you gave a much wider line variation to Juggy...which gives him a lot of mass. ( example...the right side of the figure is awesome. ) However Colossus doesn't share in that mass. In fact the area where Colossus's knee overlaps Juggys....they share the same line weights. Love your work though.

matrok
09-11-2013, 11:39 PM
wow!

lobocomics
09-12-2013, 11:15 AM
Very nice... I like more of a metalic look on colossus.. So that he has a diffrent texture than juggernaut, love the work you did on juggernaut's hands and mouth.. Cool work....

Termian
09-12-2013, 03:57 PM
Nice art and inks!

JOinks
09-13-2013, 12:43 PM
Thanks guys!

JuanAlbarran
09-14-2013, 08:23 PM
Feathering needs some work, those lines should be thicker when they get closer to the black, it'll make the transition a lot smoother. Other than that, this is pretty damn good

Justice41
09-14-2013, 10:18 PM
The inks are nice but the actual artwork is wacky. Think some forget Juggernaut has a normal head under his helmet. Linework like this is too reliant on colors to show material and texture. Woulda been much better if the artist had done a bit more metal efx on Colossus. When doing a halo just cross/connect/finish lines then use white ink to do the halo, unless this was digital. Get a more even halo that way. Way too many random line weights here. All heavy line should be consistent, right now Juggy has heavy lines on all sides of his figure meaning lights are all over yet there aren't any shadows. The line weights are on you, the wacked drawing is on the penciller.

jonas72
09-18-2013, 04:34 PM
also i think a lot of artist forget that colossus is actually taller than juggy peter is 6'6 normal and 7'6 armored up juggy is 6'10.

David Tigner
09-21-2013, 05:21 AM
Very nice!!! I love the intensity!!