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rhino1987
08-28-2013, 08:14 AM
Logo design any feedback would helpful. Also I couldn't decide which one I liked better with the mask or without the mask. So here are both :)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mn9kFV-mK4M/Uh3ZtCiJlnI/AAAAAAAAAwA/6aWJhX5ncCc/s1600/Activtiy-2-without-mask.jpghttp://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8XS8eT-ALLw/Uh3ZuvYwcSI/AAAAAAAAAwI/Lcx90lbwdCU/s1600/Activtiy-2.jpg

Kep!
08-29-2013, 01:36 AM
With the mask for sure.

The Logo is off to a good start, but the double perspective doesn't work for me. Also, as the drones are bluish, I'd pull a different color out of the art itself so you can make it pop better. Finally, the offset of the outline can be a cool effect, but not for this book.

These are my thoughts alone, of course.

Jeff LeBlanc
08-29-2013, 08:15 AM
I kind of like the letterforms and the offset outline, but the pattern is too much and the different slants/vanishing points for the two words don't go together very well.

rhino1987
08-30-2013, 10:09 AM
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-KvJMxJ8UDrE/UiCYKcVvMqI/AAAAAAAAAwY/juit0cwc7SI/s1600/Activtiy-2-version-2.jpg