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MitchellGary
07-03-2013, 11:36 AM
This is page 5 from "Totem" a. graphic novel in the works from writer/creator Cary Kelley http://carykelley.deviantart.com/ of Red Handed Studios http://redhandedstudios.com/. Michael Watson http://5000watts.deviantart.com/ is on pencils and I'm http://dubbery.deviantart.com/ on the inks.

http://s20.postimg.org/7dbzxn9mx/Totem_01_05_INKS.jpg (http://postimg.org/image/7dbzxn9mx/)

Ray Dillon
07-12-2013, 10:10 PM
Very good! Might give a little more line weight variance on the figures themselves (you've got the variance in planes, like foreground=thick, background=thin, but most of your contour lines on the figures themselves feel all about the same thickness. Thinner near light sources, thicker away from it, and giving each line and section a a bit of shape and form would pump this up a bit. Like rather than outlining. Like on that little section of cape between his legs, for example. If each zig-zag line varied from it's start and finish point. Make sense?

But still, good, clean work!

MitchellGary
07-12-2013, 11:11 PM
Thanks man. I've been watching you and your work for a long time. I'm extremely flattered by the idea that an artist of your caliber likes something of mine. I appreciate it a lot.

I agree with your critique of my line weights. I should of varied them more on the outlines of the characters. I'll keep that in mind on page 7. What did you think of page 6? http://dubbery.deviantart.com/art/Totem-01-06-INKS-382963243