View Full Version : Montes Coloring

05-23-2013, 11:30 PM
Hey all, love the work that gets posted here so I figured figured it was time to post some of my recent pages for critique! My current goal is to get picked up as colorist on an ongoing comic that I can really commit to.

Anyway, here is the first page:


Looking forward to some feedback


05-24-2013, 02:02 AM
Here's another page. I've always been a huge fan of Capullo so I gave this batman page a go:


05-24-2013, 09:07 PM
A test page I did a little while ago:


05-26-2013, 07:55 AM
Pages two and three look ok

05-30-2013, 11:27 AM
The first page you posted is WAY too saturated. Those colors would never print. Page three is also somewhat overly saturated as well. The Batman page is pretty good though. Some of the textures you created (specifically on the water tower in the upper left of the page) are VERY good. I will say though the Bat Signal should be projecting light UP into the sky not just sort of glowing with a flat yellow color.