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JOinks
03-23-2013, 01:13 AM
Penciled by Mike Bowden. Avengers Season One pg. 61. I found the actual book that this is published in and saw that I wasn't too far off from the original inks. Practically spot on. lol
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/079/4/b/avengers_season_1_pg61_inks_by_jo_colors-d5yp7kp.jpg

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/272/1/9/avengers_season_one_page_61_by_mikebowden-d5g7zn8.jpg

Comics Commando
03-31-2013, 06:17 AM
Not bad, but it's a tad clunky. The objects in the foreground should have thicker line-weights so they look closer to us.

The hammer in P3 doesn't pop out like it should.


Kurt Hathaway
khathawayart@gmail.com

JuanAlbarran
03-31-2013, 06:46 AM
I agree with Kurt here and I'll add you respect the pencils a little too much. Feathering needs work and you could add some textures on that hammer on P3, for instance. Overall, good work, I like it

JOinks
03-31-2013, 04:28 PM
Thank you! I'm working on all of that now. I have since started developing a "free-er" style ala Klaus Janson. I'm hoping to post some work like that in the near future.
Trying to get away from tracing lol