View Full Version : Avengers - Thor

03-23-2013, 12:13 AM
Penciled by Mike Bowden. Avengers Season One pg. 61. I found the actual book that this is published in and saw that I wasn't too far off from the original inks. Practically spot on. lol


Comics Commando
03-31-2013, 05:17 AM
Not bad, but it's a tad clunky. The objects in the foreground should have thicker line-weights so they look closer to us.

The hammer in P3 doesn't pop out like it should.

Kurt Hathaway

03-31-2013, 05:46 AM
I agree with Kurt here and I'll add you respect the pencils a little too much. Feathering needs work and you could add some textures on that hammer on P3, for instance. Overall, good work, I like it

03-31-2013, 03:28 PM
Thank you! I'm working on all of that now. I have since started developing a "free-er" style ala Klaus Janson. I'm hoping to post some work like that in the near future.
Trying to get away from tracing lol