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striker
03-04-2013, 01:24 AM
Well is this my samples inked in the pencils of peter vale, suggestions and criticisms are welcome

http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/inked/batmanpage1pencilpetervaleinkdavidcastro.jpg
http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/batman_sample__pg_01_pencil_peter_vale_300_dpi_zps df99400f.jpg
http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/inked/batmanpage2pencilpetervaleinkdavidcastro.jpg
http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/batman_sample__pg_02_pencil_peter_vale_300_dpi_zps ef03999f.jpg
http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/inked/batmanpage3pencilpetervaleinkdavidcastro.jpg
http://i936.photobucket.com/albums/ad204/jaimestar83/batmansamplepg03pencilpetervale300dpi_zpsd59c81d6. jpg

JuanAlbarran
03-04-2013, 03:33 AM
I like the overall feel of these pages when I look at them as a whole, but if I zoom in and look at the details they look a bit to dirty and sloopy to me. Feathering, specially needs work and maybe changing the tool you use will help... try using a brush to go from thin to thick and really get that transition from white to black done properly.

Hope it helps, keep up the good work! :)

Juan

JOinks
03-04-2013, 10:50 AM
I like the overall feel of these pages when I look at them as a whole, but if I zoom in and look at the details they look a bit to dirty and sloopy to me. Feathering, specially needs work and maybe changing the tool you use will help... try using a brush to go from thin to thick and really get that transition from white to black done properly.

Hope it helps, keep up the good work! :)

Juan

What he said. lol Also, you could try a Hunt 107 or 104 for feathering. If you don't already use them. They give a nice smooth, dark line for dagger strokes and feathering and all the like.

JuanAlbarran
03-04-2013, 11:01 AM
What he said. lol Also, you could try a Hunt 107 or 104 for feathering. If you don't already use them. They give a nice smooth, dark line for dagger strokes and feathering and all the like.

What he said! :har:

striker
03-04-2013, 10:49 PM
Ok joinks and what he said, thanks for advices

JOinks
03-05-2013, 12:07 PM
No problem! :D