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lobocomics
11-10-2012, 12:29 AM
Here are some new inks over Mark Bagley's pencils from a Batman comic by DC.. tell me what you think.



http://www.deviantart.com/download/336949065/799821_batman688pg2_super_by_lobocomics-d5klzk9.jpg
http://www.deviantart.com/download/336949345/batman_bagley_inks_by_lobocomics-d5klzs1.jpg

Dannthr
11-18-2012, 12:15 PM
Hey lookin' good.

I think you're being a little too generous to Bags' pencil work--he's clearly rendering on a time-budget.

Especially the last panel, there are a lot of black Xs that you've ignored and inked his sketchy render--like the foot and pants. The foot and pants are actually really difficult to read on your version, but they'd probably pop out a bit better if you paid attention to the Xs he placed.