View Full Version : Colors over Campbell's Spiderman

10-07-2012, 02:37 AM
So here is another coloring practice I'm working on.
It's 90% complete, but i was hoping that maybe a few people
here could give me some honest critiquing here.


Jasen Smith
10-08-2012, 06:40 PM
Finish it and you'll get more critiques.

Personally, I say lighten Spidey up, his blues are dipping into the blacks too much.

10-10-2012, 03:56 AM
Suggestion, take out the black completely by making sure your K value is at 0

10-13-2012, 07:23 AM
just looking at spidey .. my main concern is the highlights . His head & chest seem especially shiny (personally i think white clashes w/ red when highlighting.. and think yellow/orange gives a better look) . and on his left leg the highlight is lazy (doesn't couture with the leg shape)

also, when doing the sky layer flat make sure you get all the little pieces (like between his feet, finger &webbing , and webbing gaps [right side of page]). just makes it easier later . :)