View Full Version : Invincible no83 pg11

Jeremy Colwell
08-30-2012, 09:34 PM
More ink work practice. I figured I played it safe with my last practice, so I decided to tackle a whole page again. Ryan Ottley, on his Deviant Art page, posted this page for inkers to test their metal on, so I took it. Fun stuff to work on. Nice guy, too.

High res is available via the download link on my DA page if you want to see every pixel or are looking for inks to practice your colors. You can snag it here (link in the top right corner): http://jeremycolwell.deviantart.com/#/d5d3x83


08-30-2012, 10:28 PM
I dig it.

08-31-2012, 12:56 AM
You can go a lot heavier on the outline of the figures to set them way apart from the little pieces of whatever. Unfortunately everything kinda blends together. One of the quickest way to tell if you need to use bolder colors lines etc. is to squint at the page. Squinting makes things just kinda blurry which reveals lack of depth. try it.
Otherwise super clean which makes me think Digital, but well done.

Jeremy Colwell
08-31-2012, 02:39 PM
Thanks guys. Yeah, I still tend to use too thin a line. I think I'll go back in and beef a few of them up. Thanks for the crit!

Jeremy Colwell
08-31-2012, 04:10 PM


08-31-2012, 05:26 PM
I still dig it.

Jeremy Colwell
09-01-2012, 02:21 AM
I still thank you.