New Comic...9 pages for your eyes.

[j-redd]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/2.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/3.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/4.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/5.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/6.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/7-1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/8-1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/j-redd-rocks/9-1.jpg

[j-redd]

Anyone have any thoughts on this? Any feedback is appreciated.

[Frankmillerfan]

your style is interesting and the pacing of the action looks good..but I must say I hate the dialog balloons..otherwise...great

[Magnus]

I really like the flow! Good storytelling.

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www.magnus-aspli.com